L2 Mid E/D Presentation is basic and incomplete - lacking use of video, and few screen shots/images used. Locations are not discussed. Your influences are Slasher films yet your film has possession in it - this means there is no relationship between influences - makes no sense The logo description has no actual logo? Target audience is only based on age - what about gender? You do not explain how your storyline will contain the sub text. 5 key scenes that will be in your trailer? Where are the other concepts from your group and the feedback?
L2 Mid E/D
ReplyDeletePresentation is basic and incomplete - lacking use of video, and few screen shots/images used.
Locations are not discussed.
Your influences are Slasher films yet your film has possession in it - this means there is no relationship between influences - makes no sense
The logo description has no actual logo?
Target audience is only based on age - what about gender?
You do not explain how your storyline will contain the sub text.
5 key scenes that will be in your trailer?
Where are the other concepts from your group and the feedback?